This is my report on the floods from July the 17-18.we were learning how to write reports, not to copy and paste, how to write in third person, paraphrase and use different words.this took a while to do because i couldn't really figure out what to write but hope you enjoy.
Great to see you introducing your work and what you were learning, Jada. Just a few suggestions. One - have a background that does not distract your reader. Two, when you write what you were learning, you could comment on how well or confident you feel with that learning. I look forward to reading more of your wonderful writing.
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