I am learning to use different sentence beginning and to make sure all sentences begin with
a capital letter and end with a full stop.
a capital letter and end with a full stop.
I think I was successful because my sentence beginings have changed I always used the,and,then and that's why I think I am successful
Zoo
On sunday “my cousins and I, Aunty, Mohi” went to the zoo.
We could see animals like the red panda“My favorite animal was the
rhino and the female lions and the little blue penguin then we saw the
flamingo.After that we looked at the birds all of the rainbow birds were so
small and the same color .We saw ostriches one was sleeping the other
was string at my cousin she stared back at it then she didn’t care so she took
a selfie with both of them. Next we saw some otters they were cute. Later on we went to see the lizards one was right by our feet but it was so lazy that it just layed there.
rhino and the female lions and the little blue penguin then we saw the
flamingo.After that we looked at the birds all of the rainbow birds were so
small and the same color .We saw ostriches one was sleeping the other
was string at my cousin she stared back at it then she didn’t care so she took
a selfie with both of them. Next we saw some otters they were cute. Later on we went to see the lizards one was right by our feet but it was so lazy that it just layed there.
That day was the most Awesome day ever
Hi Jada, what a great improvement. Keep using different sentences starters, it makes your work really interesting to read.
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