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I like your story in Kawakawa and I like your similes. But you need to add more describing words
I like how you said you were scared as scaredy squirrel.
thank you ocian
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ReplyDeleteI like your story in Kawakawa and I like your similes. But you need to add more describing words
ReplyDeleteI like how you said you were scared as scaredy squirrel.
ReplyDeletethank you ocian
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