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Wednesday, May 9, 2018

Read this Awesome recount

I am learning to use different sentence beginning and to make sure all sentences begin with
a capital letter and end with a full stop.

I think  I was successful because my sentence beginings  have changed  I always used the,and,then  and that's why I think I am successful 


Zoo
On sunday  “my cousins and I, Aunty, Mohi” went to the zoo.
We could see  animals like the red panda“My favorite animal was  the
rhino and the  female lions and the  little blue penguin  then we saw the
flamingo.After that we looked  at the birds all of the rainbow birds were so
small and the same color .We saw ostriches one was sleeping  the other  
was string at my cousin she stared back at it then she didn’t care so she took
a selfie with both of them. Next we saw some otters they were cute. Later on  we went to see the lizards one was right by our feet but it was so  lazy that it just layed there.

That day was the most Awesome day ever

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jada, what a great improvement. Keep using different sentences starters, it makes your work really interesting to read.

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